Tip # 1: 动词优先（避免名词化）
We should take into consideration several factors.
He must make a decision about what to do.
They gave us information about the new research program.
We should take into consideration several factors. [7个字]
He must make a decision about what to do. [9个字]
They gave us information about the new research program. [9个字]
We should consider several factors. [5个字]
He must decide about what to do. [7个字]
They informed us about the new research program. [8个字]
× The analysis of how X-factor impacts B gene expression was conducted. [11个字]
√ We analyzed X-factor’s impact on B gene expression. [8个字]
如果你查找常见的动词名词化，可以发现一个模式。动词使用像是“make”和“take”，动名词（verb + ing），或名词由-tion，-sion，-ment，-ence，和-ance结尾的，很高机率都有一个相对应 动词， 所以当你在修改英文时，利用寻找功能找出这些结尾和动词后修正就行。
1，无意义动词 + 动词名词形:删除无意义的，将动词名词形转换为主要动词。
Joe will conduct research on the impact of the recent drought on local wildlife. → Joe will research the recent drought’s impact on local wildlife.
The board will make a decision next week about whether to accept you next week. → The board will decide next week whether to accept you.
The approval of the plan was given by the committee yesterday. → The committee approved the plan yesterday.
Their interpretation of the implementation of the institute’s program was insightful. → They insightfully interpreted how the institute implemented its program.
First was their introduction of their analysis of dreams by the trauma patients. → First, they introduced how they analyzed the trauma patients’ dreams.
4，当主词中的动词名词形与谓词的动词名词形时:将两个动词名词形转成动词，考量两者的关系并加上合理的连接词(because, when, if, although, even though, despite, etc.)。
Her understanding of the situation was evidenced by the quitting of her job. → She understood the situation … she quit her job → When she quit her job, she showed she understood the situation.
Tip # 2: 删除“Of” (改写介系词片语)
The blood pressure of the mice was elevated.
The elephant teetered along the edge of the cliff.
The focus of this project was to study the effects of increased global temperatures on local fish hatcheries.
The blood pressure of the mice was elevated. [8 words]
The elephant teetered along the edge of the cliff. [9 words]
The focus o